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One of the manga pages based on my original story.

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:iconstickfigureparadise:
How sad! I love the expressions in the last two panels.
You're good at depicting action, and your inking is also very nice. :D

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This is a Haiku
It is in my signature
Thus ends my statement

Sooo, two spiders walked into a bar; Feitan went right under it.

~bishie-stalker-club
:icondevilkue:
Awwwww!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you again and again! Well, Donny is an angel, he won't die so easily. ;)

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:iconstickfigureparadise:
Are you planning on getting your work published?

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This is a Haiku
It is in my signature
Thus ends my statement

Sooo, two spiders walked into a bar; Feitan went right under it.

~bishie-stalker-club
:icondevilkue:
Nah, I don't think so. Plus I just have about 100 manga pages and they are scenes from different parts of the story. I haven't even finished writing the story itself. ^^;

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:iconstickfigureparadise:
Haha, sounds like me and the novels I've been writing. I tend to skip about. XD
Well, if you ever feel like showing us, I'd love it if you posted more. :D

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This is a Haiku
It is in my signature
Thus ends my statement

Sooo, two spiders walked into a bar; Feitan went right under it.

~bishie-stalker-club
:icondevilkue:
Thank you! I will. ^^

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:icontyrianray:
I don't know what you call these "windows" in english xD maybe frames, whatever you should try and place them differently in order to make the page look more exciting since it's a fighting scene isn't it ? also you should try and make the speedlines more you know ...parallel. obviously you could have placed the speechbubbles much better as well ;D. it also seems like you're not used to drawing blood. I hope this helps you with your next page.

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:icondarkn2ght:
u are brave enough to try express difficult poses, so i think i should juz suggest making the panels show a consecutive close-up of a sequence of actions, for a more impact feel :D
like, well, adding a panel of sound effect before u show dripping blade. and showing the blood drip from blade unto floor while it protrudes from character's body.
cant wait to see the rest of ur story!

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There are only two worlds--your world, which is the human world, and other worlds, the fantasy. Worlds like this are worlds of human imagination:their reality, or lack of reality, is not important' Titania, Queen of Faerie(The book of Magic)
:icondevilkue:
Thank you so much for your advice! ^^ I'll try to submit some other pages too. =)

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